What Im Doing to Improve my Writing.

Lately  ive been running into dead ends mid chapters i could just skip through  them and revise  later...(witch I whole heartly do on rough drafts don't kill me).. but apart of my mind thinks there's a un trained part of my writing that I'd like to exercise  and it brought me back to high school creative writing class. Thats right.

Im practicing PROMPTS.

Who would have thought they could help! 

 Whenever im stuck ill pull up a random WP(writing prompt) from reddit or a generator. Ill try to keep them short and simple!

Here on this section  of  AFALOZ.COM I'll share some of my WP drafts for you.

Enjoy. 

-[WP] You've been "trapped" in a "VR" game for years, learnt magic, had a family, etc. But now they've "rescued" you from it all. Waking up on the hospital bed you reflexively cast a shield. Which works.

 

This was wrong. I grasped for my blade blinking hard as I watched it turn into wires in my hand. 

"Nurse!"  The scream shook me another notch into reality. Or what I thought  was. 

"Nurse! Hurry He's awake!" That voice. I remembered  that voice. It had saved me countless  times. Every adventure  I'd been on every death I'd come  back from it was her voice willing me to look past all the augmentation. 

"Mae.." Damit my voice sounded weaker then I felt i blinked again hard searching for her. I had to see her. To know this was real. 

Slowly my vision cleared and the sounds buzzing around me crisped. I still felt tendrils  of power buzzing in my veins. Or was that an iv. I pathetically  threw another shield to see if it would stick again . I saw it flash then like it was never there it shatter in front of me, leaving only Her brown eyes staring back at me.

"Mae. Hi." She looked tired  and beautifuly real. She smiled and I felt my real heart beat for the first time in years.

"Hey Zsoler." She smiled and My world shattered propelling me into intoxicating bliss.I pulled her in for a hug and she melted. 

"I'm back." I whispered  in her ear. Apart of my heart ached for the world I knew as reality  but nothing could compare to the way my true reality squeezed  me just a little bit tighter. 

-wp1